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Healing Brandi//Chapter 1
Helloooo there fine people of youtube. OKAY, so a couple of days ago was a tuesday, but not just any tuesday my friends...it was JUSTIN FKIN BIEBER'S 17TH BIRTHDDAYYYYYY .. WOOO! - ok, i am now calm again. So.. yes, i am starting a new series. I planned this out for months, and i feel that you guys will like it too. I hope you do, but if you don't, it's cool my homeskillybiscuit. Keep in note, that one really odd fact about me is that I strongly dislike posting pictures of the girl who is supposed to play the main characters in my stories. Why? Because I think that when someone does that, it ruins the whole story- it's kinda like when you read twilight, then watch the movie. Completely different from how you pictured Bella, right? And I only post pics of Ariana, cuz' thats for specifically a Ariana/ justin story. SO yes, i'm rambling on. So yea, hope you enjoy :
Third Person Omniscient [ No Pov ] :
Springing up from her ear-splitting alarm clock in shock, Brandi Montgomery rushed over, quickly turning it off. "I gotta remember to get myself a new one." she mentally noted, as she opened her black cotton curtains, illuminating her dark room. She switched her small T.V. on, hoping to find something that will catch her eyes. Finding nothing that interested her, she walked into the bathroom, ready to start her day. After her warm, relaxing shower, she got out cautiously, not wanting to fall on the slippery tile floors. She walked into her room, with a red cotton bath towel fitted around her petite yet curvy body.
"Your going to be late Brandi!" A loud screech from downstairs echoed up to her room, making her cringe in disgust.
"Yea, whatever." Brandi replied back, quickly changing into her everyday school clothes.
Brandi's mom, Olivia, was tapping her freshly painted, expensive fake nails on the family's brand new mahogany kitchen table. She hesitated, looking at what Brandi was wearing this morning.
Brandi wore her vintage grey zip-up sweatshirt that was about two sizes too big, jeans, and scuffed black high-top sneakers. Her hair was roughly put up in a bun, with loose strands of hair swaying near her cheekbones. She sighed, and swung her backpack on her right shoulder.
Olivia put on a disgusted face, shaking her head. After watching her only daughter walk downstairs with what she thought was clothes that must have belonged to a homeless man, she sighed. "You know, if you think about your image, you can at least have one friend." She lifted one eyebrow, grabbing her keys and marching outside to her car, with her blinding neon juicy couture sweatsuit.
"Well, if you can for once buy me clothes instead of hogging them for yourself, I won't have a problem with that." Brandi snapped back in a sour tone.
"Your sixteen, it's called get a job." Olivia slid her keys in, rumbling her car to life. "Now, we gotta hurry, we have to get you to school."
"Woo, i'm excited." Brandi's sarcasm shot back.
"Have fun kiddo." Olivia practically forced Brandi out of her car and into the filled school parking lot, so she can get to 'work', which was really her shopping time at the mall for the day.
Brandi turned, watching her evil mother drive away. She hesitantly turned back around, facing what she has always dreaded the most. North Riley High School. Those four words, make her shiver in fear. No, it's not her grades that's always on her mind. She's probably one of the smartest kids you'll ever meet. Grade Average, 4.0. That's amazing, let me tell you. The only thing that makes her hate this place is, yes, the fellow high schoolers that walk the halls with her. They physically and mentally hurt her, with their words, and fists. Is it jealously, perhaps? Well, Brandi is a pretty girl. Of course, being hidden beneath her clothes. She didn't know why, but to them, she was their personal punching bag.
Yes, your probably wondering, "how does she handle it?" Well, it's not easy, let me tell you that. She always gets a feeling, the urge to just end her life. For some reason, something is always stopping her. What's the thing that is stopping her? Her faith, that everything will get better, if she just believed.
END OF CHAPTER ONE.. DUN DUN DUN... so..
1-is it good/bad/so-so/fkin horrible/ blahh??
2-soo.. comment?? any changes, any.. complaints? please, I learn from my critiques.
3- anyone watch the Never Say Never Movie Yet? Cuz I have WOO, and the director's cut . OH MAH HEAVENS. He's one gorgeous boy.
4-anyone celebrate his birthday? ;) he and i did.. you know, we had a little fun in his bed..
AND YES, FOR ALL Y'ALL WONDERIN, justin bieber WILL be in the next chapter, so don't go crazy lol.